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    Sunil Kumar Jha जंगल बीच
    गम्हरायल अछि
    आमक बौर

    July 14, 2011 at 4:57pm ·  · 3
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    Sunil Kumar Jha दैत सनेश
    एही आमक गाछ
    रहू झुकल
    जों बेसी ये अहाँक
    नै ते टूटी जाएब

    July 14, 2011 at 4:59pm ·  · 2
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    Shiv Kumar Jha ohi kavitak pratiksha rahat..

    July 14, 2011 at 6:55pm ·  · 3
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    Shyam Sunder Choudhary pher mon padi geil majral aamak gachi aa khopri mein baisi tas khelebak sukh.Jan sab dis ahina rahey gachi tan bacha sab global warning san banchal rahat

    July 14, 2011 at 7:26pm ·  · 2
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    Deepak Jha jhuem ke aayal basant............... hamar mon ke laig gel pankh........... aamak bari me ghuim ke geto..........madmast basuri bajeton............. jeevan bh gel rahe berang....... basant bharlak man me rang..... jai mithila , jai maithili

    July 14, 2011 at 8:03pm ·  · 4
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    Sanjay Kumar Mandal aayal he sakhi madhumas, askar kona bitayab basant,priyatam nahi chhathi pas, chithiyo nahi likhai chhathi he sakhi, faguo me aaota gam nahi achhi biswas, jakhan dekhait chhi majral gachhi, mon hoeye geet gabi,jhula jhuli muda sajna bin bha jait chhi udas.

    July 14, 2011 at 9:17pm ·  · 6
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    Indra Bhushan Kumar mah-mah mahkait manjar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    July 15, 2011 at 2:52pm ·  · 3
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    Amit Prakash ambua majari gaile, bvajlei kloyaliya se, jiyara me pains gaile huk re videsiya

    July 16, 2011 at 12:53am ·  · 3
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    Prabin Chaudhary Pratik guchha latkal bagiyame, bat johait,batohi ker.

    July 16, 2011 at 1:04am ·  · 3