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• You, Dinesh Gupta, Sarbesh Kumar, Kumar Umesh Mahto and 24 others like this.
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    मिहिर झा Ahi par kichu likhai ke nahi, Khai ke mon karait aich.

    July 17, 2011 at 12:36pm ·  · 6
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    Shishir S. Jha Haath Karay Luch - Luch aa Moonh me Paain ,nay Utthe Karchi (pen) nay Phuray Baain(speech.)

    July 17, 2011 at 12:57pm ·  · 7
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    मिहिर झा आ रे लीची आ आ आ, इम्हर बाटे आ की उम्हर बाटे आ | गुरैक गुरैक के मुहे मे आ |

    July 17, 2011 at 1:01pm ·  · 5
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    Abhay N Das hariyar pat madhya kaanch leechi ekhan intezar karu

    July 17, 2011 at 2:05pm ·  · 4
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    Vinay Jha Dekha k muh se pani khasabet chi thore patha dev senahi . jeth bhai ke aab yeh kaj bachal chain ki chot ke lalchau.

    July 17, 2011 at 6:39pm ·  · 3
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    Amit Prakash Mihir jee, badd sundar. Aab lichi par ehi sa besi nik jaka ahlaad kona vyakt kael ja skaichh...)

    July 17, 2011 at 10:50pm ·  · 5
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    Gajendra Thakur खट मधुर/ हरियर आ लाल/ संगे-संग छै

    July 18, 2011 at 2:01am ·  · 4
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    मिहिर झा Gajendra Ji, ekdam tham parhak gaap kahlahu. Jahina sukh ke mahatva dukh ke baade pade pata chalait chhaik, tahina madhur ke swad khatpan ke baade hoit chhaik aur dune ekke kaincha ke du ta muh chhaik.

    July 18, 2011 at 8:55am ·  · 4
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    Ranjeet Jha Muzaffarpur ke lichi......wah ki bat chhai...

    July 19, 2011 at 5:14pm ·  · 4
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    Vinay Jha lichi dekhi ka muh s tena pani khasit achi agr muh kholi k rahi t balti bhari jayat lekin Gajendra bhai ji bar nisthur chaith eko ber e nai khla je hm ptha rahal chi takar hamra bad dukh achi aai nai ktek din s o lichi k entzar kai rahak chi kani aahu sab Gaju bhai s parivi kai diy u maithil bhai.

    July 19, 2011 at 10:07pm ·  · 1
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    Vinay Jha Like kahala s kaj nahi chalt lichi pathu

    July 19, 2011 at 10:58pm ·  · 1
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    Vinay Jha Fer like khik thaki delhu prityji muda lichi aahu nahi pathelhu. dur jau

    July 19, 2011 at 11:22pm ·  · 2
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    Kandarp Thakur Lichi jaka mith....blog aaiychh...Aha Mihila................

    July 19, 2011 at 11:26pm ·  · 2
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    Shailendra Mishra eke rang ke cheej likh ke kiya bor karait fahait chhi ...

    July 19, 2011 at 11:32pm ·  · 1
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    Vijay Kumar Jha sundar haiku gajendra thakur ji/aa sundar abhivyakti mihir ji/ shishirji/ kandarp ji/ abhay ji/ vinay ji

    July 19, 2011 at 11:48pm ·  · 2
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    Vinay Jha mishra ji e likha la s kaj nai chalat lichi pathau ya Gajendra bhai s bhejwau t aaha ke bat manav nahi teke rang ke bat likhet rahav.

    July 19, 2011 at 11:53pm ·  · 1
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    Vinay Jha E lichije nai karavai. aagi lagav wala chup chap baisal chith.

    July 19, 2011 at 11:55pm ·  · 1
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    Vinay Jha Aakhir bat ki achi je comment deait chi muda lichi nahi deait chi khatam bha gel ki . eko baer pata nahi puchet chi je kon tham pathu

    July 19, 2011 at 11:58pm · 
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    Shailendra Mishra Jarur Vinay G.... Lichi khayabak mon bha rahal aichh...

    July 19, 2011 at 11:59pm · 
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    Vinay Jha chali sangi t bhelu aab Gajendra bhai ke dewy parten

    July 20, 2011 at 12:01am · 
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    Vinay Jha E lichi vivadit bhai rahal achi yekro lokpal ke tahat labay parat

    July 20, 2011 at 12:02am · 
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    Vinay Jha paresani me Gajendra bhai parta nahi t lichi dai mamla ke khatm karuth.

    July 20, 2011 at 12:03am ·  · 2
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    Ranjeet Jha muzaffar pur ke lichhi apane des me nahi pure duniya me BIHAR ke ek ta alag pehchan chorai chhai...... proud i m Bihari and lichhi is our petented fruits......

    July 20, 2011 at 7:19am ·  · 3