ऐ चित्रपर एकटा हाइकू लिखू।

ऐ सुन्दर चिड़िकेँ देखू जे कचार हिल्सपर रहैए आ ऐपर एकटा हाइकू लिखू। (चित्र: सौजन्य श्री कैलाश कुमार मिश्र)

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• Gangesh Gunjan, Shiv Kumar Jha, रवि भूषण पाठक and7 others like this.
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    Gajendra Thakur पात आ चिड़ै/ एक दोसरा सन/ स्किन कलर

    March 30, 2011 at 11:39pm ·  · 2
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    'Vivekanand Jha' चिडैँ पाँखि सँऽ/तौलि रहल अछि/देस दुनिया

    March 31, 2011 at 12:24am ·  · 3
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    Jyoti Suneet चीडै नजरि
    कचार स अइ गडौने
    क्रिकेट के खेल में

    March 31, 2011 at 3:23am ·  · 2
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    Gajendra Thakur jyotiji, pahil 5 akshar/ muda dosar 9 aa tesar 7 akshar bhay gel achhi/ maithili me akshar (varna) aa syllable me tartamya chhai. tesar paanti ke beech me day sakai chhi, aa tesar 5 aksharak banau

    March 31, 2011 at 9:38am ·  · 1
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    Gajendra Thakur jyotiji ena:चिड़ै नजरि/ क्रिकेटक खेलमे/ अइ गडौने

    March 31, 2011 at 4:44pm ·  · 2
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    Jyoti Suneet thanks Gajendraji, but in English syllable doesn't mean letters but the breaks in pronunciation, similarly in hindi too one akshar or sanyuktakhar should n't make one syllable, it depends on sound, this is my opinion

    March 31, 2011 at 5:56pm · 
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    Gajendra Thakur Jyotiji, In Samskrit Metres with seventeen syllables are; Shikharani, Prithvi, Vamshapatrapatitam, Mandakranta, Harini, Nardattakam, Kokilakam, Haarini and Bharakranta; all are varnik Chhandas having exactly 17 varna/ akshara (17 syllables in each pada); therefore for Maithili also I have taken 17 varna/ akshara for 17 syllables. Regards

    March 31, 2011 at 10:32pm ·  · 1
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    Jyoti Suneet wow great, thanks for this information....

    April 1, 2011 at 3:20am ·  · 1
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    रवि भूषण पाठक ई खचरहबा
    खोजि रहल छओ
    भाग फतींगा

    April 1, 2011 at 8:04am ·  · 1
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    Gajendra Thakur bad neek raviji